摘要:美国德贝（Derby）大学所追求完美的是为全部要想学习培训而且可以从高等职业教育获利的人*机遇。大家不仅仅是对这些早已取得成功的人很感兴趣。大家要想灵活运用大家的資源为大量的人*服务项目。伴随着课堂教学工作的发展趋势，大家期待可以渐渐地解决公共性股票基金。（节选自德贝大学校长讲话）下列是该大学对…
美国德贝（Derby）大学所追求完美的是为全部要想学习培训而且可以从高等职业教育获利的人*机遇。大家不仅仅是对这些早已取得成功的人很感兴趣。大家要想灵活运用大家的資源为大量的人*服务项目。伴随着课堂教学工作的发展趋势，大家期待可以渐渐地解决公共性股票基金。（节选自德贝大学校长讲话）
下列是该大学对ps的创作规定。全文详细地址：
http://exposure.derby.ac.uk/bob/apply.html
Personal Statement
This is the key area of the application form and the one to which most attention is paid. It’s the only opportunity to sell yourself. Admissions Tutors are looking for a carefully crafted few paragraphs which will convince them to offer you a place. They want you to sell yourself to them.它是将你买一个好价格的*机遇。
Why?
Admissions Tutors want to see clear logical reasons why you’ve chosen a course. You need to demonstrate that you have properly thought about what you want to do and why. Committed students who’ve put thought into their course choice are more likely to do well and less likely to drop out. 期待见到你挑选某一技术专业的强大的原因，你应该展现你想做什么及其为什么这般？
Work Experience
Tutors will look for evidence of work experience, especially if it complements your course choice. They also like to see an indication of how you feel your work experience has benefited you, either personally or career wise. 工作经历，尤其是假如这种工作经历与你的课程内容挑选相符合。
Personal Qualities
If you mention a particular quality that you have, give an example e.g. if you say you are well organised, then say you always meet deadlines for your assignments (but only if it’s true!!).性格特征，一定要真正啊！！
Your Contribution
Admission Tutors also look for some evidence that you have a contribution to make towards the course, for example evidence that you have good communication skills.
Other Interests
Tell them what you enjoy doing besides studying. It will help gain an impression of what kind of person you are.
DON’T WAFFLE BUT DON’T MAKE IT TOO BRIEF!不必夸一夸奇谭，也不必过度简单
Separate out the statement into clear paragraphs or sections which discuss different aspects of your application.
Make sure that the information that you provide is clear, well presented and correctly spelt. For paper applications remember that your application will be reduced in size and if it is not well written and clear to start with, imagine how much worse it will be when it has been reduced!
Produce several practice copies and ask someone to read over and check your final draft for you. Also, make sure that the information you want to include fits into the space that you have on the application form. There’s nothing worse than if you have to make your writing smaller and smaller to fit it in or if you tail off because there is no space left! *的信息务必确立、主要表现强有力、拼读恰当。
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