摘要:提前准备撰写美国留学公文的学生们，了解美国留学文书写作都包含什么內容吗?在其中的个人陈述一样十分关键，可是在撰写美国留学申请文书个人陈述开头的情况下，一定要留意以下几个方面：美国留学文书写作个人陈述开头误区一、救世型Iamaproblemsolver.Ihaveanimpulseasakindofi…
提前准备撰写美国留学公文的学生们，了解美国留学文书写作都包含什么內容吗?在其中的个人陈述一样十分关键，可是在撰写美国留学申请文书个人陈述开头的情况下，一定要留意以下几个方面：
美国留学文书写作个人陈述开头误区一、救世型
I am a problem solver. I have an impulse as a kind of instincts to solvevarious problems before me and enjoy doing that. Since I was a little boy, a voice from President Franklin Roosevelt has constantly hovered around my mind, "The world can be changed by man's endeavor, …
点评：一副救世的品牌形象，儿时就受富兰克林的危害，志向改变命运。个人陈述的写作一定要个性化细化，别吹大牛，乃至带著一种单边主义逻辑思维。
美国留学文书写作个人陈述开头误区二、犹抱琵琶型
Making a right decision at the right time is very important for a young people .At present, I have come to a critical point in my life when I have to make a decision concerning my future course of action. Only a perceptive understanding of oneself will enable one to chart his proper action. Aftercarefully thinking, reviewing my life and analyzing my personality, I make the determination and choose to apply for graduate study in XXX. And I choose to specialize in communications which I will pursue a lifelong career.
点评：关键放到自身要做重特大决策到了，人生道路的大转折，随后来上句说白了格言。消耗篇幅，比较有限的篇幅里，学生们应当学好立即，而且把握住关键，突显自身*有优点的层面，*有特点的层面。
美国留学申请文书个人陈述开头写作误区三、剽窃句型型
As a student majoring in Computer Science, I began my odyssey since I entered undergraduate program. Indeed, having entered this splendid computer world, I am more than greedy for something new.
点评：Odyssey 和more than greedy for something new 这类句型不清楚是以哪儿学得的，许多同学们再用。但你需要了解，外国人*讨厌剽窃，*爱原創，因此 利益关系大伙儿想一想吧。
个人陈述开头写作误区四、反复个人简历型
I earned my Bachelor of Science degree in … Sciences with a specialization in … in 2002 at … university
点评：美国留学个人陈述不必去重个人简历中的物品，这在许多院校的PS规定中确立提及，个人陈述的写作要实际到恶性事件上，恶性事件处理上，而不必单纯性反复现有的內容。
美国留学申请文书个人陈述开头写作误区五、学校简介型
I am an undergraduate in…University , the largest university anda cradle of scientific and technological talents in China.
点评：该同学们的个人陈述开头等因此一个申请办理院校的介绍，这好像是在协助院校做宣传策划，或表述给你多掌握该院校，而不是写个人陈述了。它是没有意义的开头，浪费了篇幅，*非常容易被秒据掉。
个人陈述开头写作误区六、言*气型
'Why the gecko can climb on the wall while we can't-' 'Why the leaves turn red in autumn' 'How many stars are there in the sky-' When I was in childhood, I always kept asking my mom all kinds of questions。I am especially interested in how things work, I can even take apart things for several hours in order to find out its principle.
点评：上去就儿时的记忆青少年自身怎样拥有志向远大，who cares。个人陈述篇幅比较有限，却用这么多话叙述儿时，沒有一切实际意义。院校想要知道你怎样看待将来，而不是怎样渡过以往。
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